I'm sure you will "fix" it and make it even better. But I do agree some kind of a frame around would set it off.
Gorgeous as is!!!Only put decorative frame around..Will look lovely!!
Before reading pennyhal's comment, I thought a frame or brackets, too. Love your colors and the wording.
I like the wording! We probably all can identify with this! I
think it might need more embellishment. A frame around the words? Or, a design of an older person. Or maybe just a delightful border around the top of the bag above the ribbon. Depending on who you are giving it to, a motif on the back of it? Even though it is stitched up, you could probably still get the bag hooped.